Sunday, October 12, 2008 (0.')
yoo how u guy?haha... i notice that there is an error on my last post.. haha.. living such be leaving... i had change le... it in my poem part...
i had another poem la... lol had also read abit of the story... but just feel like blogging out 1... erm i blog abt the poem ba... haha
a person is like a sea
it can be clam and it can b fierce
a person life is like time
it can be day and it can be night
ppl will definitly reject night and fierce
but this are the tin that they will nv realize
till some 1 told them
ended in a regreted life
ppl who are clam and day are alway welcomed
but there alway up or down of them
but they don care and continue living
this is wat i wish u are
how i wish i can
give u fortunate
give u happiness
how i wish i can
make u please
make u not lonely
but it too late
cos i'm stepping into the world of night and fierce soon
the world of regreted in the whole life
where i can't
see u
touch u
sense u
non even kiss
tireness come and sadness came
but living with happiness and egnertize infornt of u
this is wat a person does living in the world of night and fierce
a world of no where.....
haha can sense the present of the poem?
haha erm the story next time ba
cos going swimming again
haha byby
i will finish my NS, my university and wait for u.
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